Your detective
work is just about over and the verdict on your investigation will soon be
delivered. It's now time to consider just what markers expect and just how your
essay is likely to be assessed. As an academic detective you've learned to look
for clues, to analyse various theories and to support what you say with
credible evidence. However, before you submit your essay, it's time to
proofread your work.
You've finished
your essay, the pressure is off, and you're feeling a mixture of satisfaction
and relief. The last thing you want to do is sit down and check your essay
carefully one more time. Most students don't spend enough time proofreading
their essays, but it's not enough just to rely on a computer spell-checker.
Some students submit essays without proofreading them, only to find that the
pages are out of order, references are incorrect, the printer was out of
alignment or the reference list is missing. If you do proofread your essay,
you'll usually find some mistakes that can easily be corrected and you'll be
protected against unnecessary loss of marks.
The following
example may sound familiar. Often when you write out the final version of your
essay, you fix up some of the sentence structure and expression along the way.
It is not uncommon for a word to be on the ‘tip of your tongue’,
but it refuses to pop out, so you leave a space for the word, making a mental
note to come back to it later. A variation on this theme is an essay full of
correction fluid gaps. You find a mistake, use correction fluid and, as it
dries, you make a mental note to come back to it. In both cases, it is easy to
forget these mental notes and to hand in an essay with white blanks on the
pages.
How to
avoid proofreading pitfalls
Proofreading
isn't easy, so don't rush it. Mistakes are easy to miss even when you are
looking for them. Because you are familiar with the material, as you read
through it your mind tends to anticipate what is to come and you begin to gloss
over what you are reading. The simplest way to overcome such proofreading
pitfalls is to get a friend or family member to proofread your work. If you go
it alone, the only way not to miss mistakes is to read your essay line by line.
Block all the lines of your essay, bar the one you are actually reading, with a
ruler or piece of paper. Concentrate on each word in the line, then move to the next line while keeping the others covered.
Line by line is the only sure way to do it.
A final
quality check: Keep it simple
Your essay
marker knows the subject well, but it is up to you to prove that you do, too.
As a final quality check of the clarity of your writing, imagine you handed
your essay to someone on the street. Would they be able to understand it? Have
you expressed your argument clearly and explained all the concepts and theories
you used? If possible, ask a friend or family member to read your essay and
point out anything they don't understand. Sometimes what is in your head does n't make it on to paper. It is easy to become so involved
in the writing process that you over-summarise your material because you assume
the reader knows what you mean. Think again! The marker can only mark what is
on paper. She or he is marking your understanding of the issues as you have written
it, not what's in your head, so make sure your essay is simple to understand.